Florence Margaret Smith (Stevie Smith) was born on September, 20 1902 in Hull, England. She lived with her aunt after her father joined the North Sea Patrol and her mother passed away. In 1966, Smith won the Chomondeley Award for Poetry. Plus, Smith won the Queen's Gold Medal for Poetry in 1969. Smith died March 7, 1971 from a brain tumor in London.
Not Waving but Drowning
Nobody heard him, the dead man,
But still he lay moaning:
I was much further out than you thought
And not waving but drowning.
Poor chap, he always loved larking
And now he's dead
It must have been too cold for him his heart gave way,
They said.
Oh, no no no, it was too cold always
(Still the dead one lay moaning)
I was much too far out all my life
And not waving but drowning.
Throughout the poem, there is a shift between two different speakers. A bystander is present through most of the poem by describing the circumstance of the dead man. The other speaker is the dead man himself who says "I was much further out than you thought And not waving but drowning."
I decided the best way to analyze this poem was to take it stanza by stanza.
The first two lines of the poem "Nobody heard him, the dead man, But still he lay moaning:" is a description of the dead man by the bystander. No one could help the dead man because there was no one around to hear him; he died a lonely death. The next two lines are the direct account of the dead man "I was much further out than you thought And not waving but drowning." This could be interpreted as the idea that no one was there to hear his cries for help, but someone could have seen his gesture (waving) for help. Unfortunately, the waving was misunderstood and the man drowned. (It would stink if somebody waved back hello instead of gotten help...) I feel like the first stanza was a little background info to help the reader understand the rest of the poem.
The second stanza starts off as "Poor chap, he always loved larking And now he's dead" which shifts back to the bystander speaker. Here, the reader gets the bystander's "sympathy" for the dead man and a brief insight of his life (or the bystanders perspective on his life!!). I feel the next two lines "It must have been too cold for him his heart gave way, They said." are the bystander's assumption on why the man died. But, no one really knows but the dead man himself. I feel that the second stanza was a second hand account of the man's death by the bystander instead of the facts or truth.
The third stanza veers into a very different idea than the first two stanzas. "On, no no no, it was too cold always (Still the dead one lay moaning)" The bystander is still the speaker and portrays the idea that the water was always cold (no surprise that the man died) yet the man kept on moaning. The bystander doesn't really seem to care about the dead man, and I see a hint of annoyance from the bystander (why won't the dead man keep quiet, why does he have to keep on moaning?). Finally, the poem shifts back to the dead man's perspective as "I was much too far out all my life And not waving but drowning." The only difference between these two lines and the ones that appeared in the first stanza are all my life. Three short words, but they make a huge significance. I feel that these lines portray the idea that people sometimes feel that life is too much, too overwhelming, too crazy, and they experience a drowning feeling. People wave their hands, a flag, or a neon sign trying to ask for help and get noticed. But, people pass that person by leaving him or her to drown in the sometimes overwhelming sorrows of life. Overall, I learned that people want to be heard, but are not noticed until it is too late (they died).